Bone Dry
Posted in Uncategorized with tags 2007, Buffington Carl, Drama, Goss Luke, Henriksen Lance, Larsen Richard, Lister Tommy 'Tiny', Stalcup Chad, Thames Hudson, Thriller on February 28, 2010 by dannyortiz1966|
IMDB rating: 5.60 Plot: Eddie (Goss) finds himself being forced at a gunpoint, by an unseen assailant, on a dark and brutal journey through the harsh terrain of Texas. His nemesis is Jimmy (Henriksen), a man with an aberrant agenda; armed with a rifle, a scope, walkie-talkies and a truck, he has organized a series of ambushes and mantraps designed to push Eddie to the limits of his humanity and beyond. |
Actors: Goss Luke,Henriksen Lance,Lister Tommy ‘Tiny’,Buffington Carl,Larsen Richard,Stalcup Chad,Thames Hudson,Drama,Thriller,
Is this a good scene?
I’m debating on whether this scene in my book should be included. It’s NOT the cliche dream scene - as the protagonist is actually aware that it is a dream.
Also, I believe "he" is used too much. Any ideas on how to fix this and the scene’s other flaws would be welcomed.
The rose bore rigid, steely petals. He stroked his finger down one, and it blackened under his touch. As its colour was leeched, the petal crumbled away like ash.
In the dream, he wore a crown of rusted blades and nothing else, but he was alone. His hair was blonde again, plaited down his back in intricate ropes of gold. There was a slight breeze, and it plucked at the long bangs framing his narrow face.
His land sprawled for leagues, a mad tangle of iron thorn and silver rose. As he began to walk, the bushes scratched the prince

